Posted by: truevoid | June 21, 2009

blue sky

on a day when the sky was so captivating and during the time when i was thinking “shouldn’t you try your hands at photography” i clicked this using a normal digital camera. i liked the outcome, i felt that it was a nice click – of course no professional has commented on this picture yet. i was too elated to get my first click so nicely that i shared it with others (which i don’t do generally) asking for positive feedback.

blue sky

blue sky | by truevoid| on 27 aug 2007

teelair wrote back with few lines. needless to say i was too delighted because on seeing the picture he was compelled to write. to cut the story short. i will be posting his lines. and i rewrote few of his lines (which i will be posting as well). and the picture too!

teelair wrote:

It looks beautiful
To personify,
she looks beautiful to be looked from far away
There are complexities within her
All those to her and for herself to know her

The clouds within her wander so beautifully
But not sure where they are going
Aimless movement with a desire to wander
Stop her by to question, where are you going
Only to find no answer

But she looks beautiful
She doesn’t know herself and others too don’t understand her

A desire to love and to be loved
But not sure where to go, how to go and what to do

my version:

she looks beautiful at the first sight
only a closer look show her real blues
she is like a storm engulfed in calmness
ready to scream her pains..is it love?
may be or may not be – you never know!

there are complexities within her
and may be thats why she is so beautiful
she wants to express something…pain?
love is beautiful they tell – she asks does it hurt?
may be or may not be – you never know!

the clouds within her wander aimlessly
may be these clouds are like thoughts
moving through the minds without
any desire – could they be tears?
may be or may not be – you never know!

no breeze no wind can know her intentions
if you stop her by to ask a question, ‘where are you going’
she answers in silence, her tears threatening
to drown the world – can this pain be love?
may be or may not be – you never know!

but she looks beautiful
she knows not herself, others too don’t understand her
is it a desire to love and to be loved?
or is it just a wonderful sight?
may be or may not be – you never know!

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